Engrish alert!
This page didn`t go through grammar/spelling check… yeah just saying. ^^;
And whew, close to finish this little side story.
Haha, Xav is so cute^^ ‘specially in the second-to-last panel.
Engrish alert: In panel 2, “you were came from” should be “you came from”.
Great strip though, really good.
Urk! How did I miss that… Originally it was “So you were created…” but I thought “came” would fit better and… this was the result.
Thanks, Stonefoot! I`ll edit it in a jiffy.
So SWEET!!! Gosh, I hope he does make it back to his owner. That’d be so wonderful.
I must spread news of this comic. :3
So that was an “editing glitch” and not really “engrish” at all. And you’re right that “came from” fits better than “were created from” (which would imply a third party doing the creating).
And it’s a great strip. (Yes, I know, I already said that.) :D
I don’t think Xav will go back to his original owner right away. More likely he’ll tag along with Denny’s team for some time first, as a way to show Denny his grattitude.
Anyway, lovely page here. :)
Yeah! Us boring grown-ups NEED our muses to not give up on us!
And here he was hoping that you had forgotten about the gold. >>
I seriously love all of Denny’s lines on this page though. They’re all so true.
Hey it is important that the gold gets returned!
And dang, I`m still unhappy at the scenes flow in the next chapter even after redoing the storyboard four times already… TT I just see how I`ll spend another day staring at my notes and random sketches.
But on the bright side… Xav may indeed stick around for longer than planned.
As usual… thanks for the comments guys! Glad to know you enjoy the story so far. ^^
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Engrish alert!
This page didn`t go through grammar/spelling check… yeah just saying. ^^;
And whew, close to finish this little side story.
Haha, Xav is so cute^^ ‘specially in the second-to-last panel.
Engrish alert: In panel 2, “you were came from” should be “you came from”.
Great strip though, really good.
Urk! How did I miss that… Originally it was “So you were created…” but I thought “came” would fit better and… this was the result.
Thanks, Stonefoot! I`ll edit it in a jiffy.
So SWEET!!! Gosh, I hope he does make it back to his owner. That’d be so wonderful.
I must spread news of this comic. :3
So that was an “editing glitch” and not really “engrish” at all. And you’re right that “came from” fits better than “were created from” (which would imply a third party doing the creating).
And it’s a great strip. (Yes, I know, I already said that.) :D
I don’t think Xav will go back to his original owner right away. More likely he’ll tag along with Denny’s team for some time first, as a way to show Denny his grattitude.
Anyway, lovely page here. :)
Yeah! Us boring grown-ups NEED our muses to not give up on us!
And here he was hoping that you had forgotten about the gold. >>
I seriously love all of Denny’s lines on this page though. They’re all so true.
Hey it is important that the gold gets returned!
And dang, I`m still unhappy at the scenes flow in the next chapter even after redoing the storyboard four times already… TT I just see how I`ll spend another day staring at my notes and random sketches.
But on the bright side… Xav may indeed stick around for longer than planned.
As usual… thanks for the comments guys! Glad to know you enjoy the story so far. ^^