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To answer your question ma’am: No, it can’t end like this because then we would have no comic.

And the water texture doesn’t look bad, it’s just in the first panel Denny jumps right out at your because she’s so glaringly white against the grayish water texture. Other than it’s perfectly fine.

@Shiori(Stripes)
Oops! Someone pointed that to me when earlier before I uploaded it and it still escaped my mind to correct it. She looks so cut-paste on that panel lol

@basiasadie
Thanks again! ^^

@tweax
We can`t have game over so soon now can we? ^^

@The Random Panda
Thank you! I`m still learning… its definitely fun but I keep worrying that I either have too much happening on the pages or too little, do I put too much actions or not enough, do I move the story too slow or its good lol guess everyone feels that way when drawing a comic for a first time XD;;

@Khend
We all need to almost drown every once in a while when we go to a fantasy world, aye? It`s part of the epic experience!

@Joey
Lol yeah figured you`ll care more about the gold T__T;

@Everyone else
Thanks for the comments once again!
Next page we see who will save her and who gets the cookies for guessing right. ^^

Imp-guy seems like the best bet (He needs an entry on the cast page, I think.), but I could make a case for Xavier. He seems to me to be too afraid to jump, but he’s also in a panic over losing his heart, which could push him over the edge (literally). That lighthouse looks high enough for him to think “OMG, what have I done, I’m gonna DIE!” four or five times before he hits the water.
Then probably he and Denny both need saving.

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