The wind of muse is being purified on the last shot but… it’s probably hard to tell. ^^;
And I just now saw how I missed to clean this page’s borders… x_x
Typo in the last panel, last bubble. “For a long time, we THOUGHT you would meet the same fate…”
Man Chapter 7 is probably my favorite so far – its getting more and more awesome as I click to each new page! Really love Alberius and interesting exposition here! I like the last panel – could tell it was getting purified as the blackness fading away makes it look like the corruption is fading. It’s a pretty neat visual!
I love the High Priest’s serene smile as he says, “They’re dead.”
@Youmitsumi
Whoops! I will correct it when I can!
@Joel
About time we got answers. And to think I was thinking how FF1 will fit in 100 pages… ^^;
@Rogue of Words
Alberius is a practical guy. ^_^;;;
So maybe Grumps is one of the 3 ? Erio maybe ? That would be a twist, would it not ? :D
Bubble 8 needs grammar correction. “Just how Muses appear in your world as inspiring ideas leading to creations, same way the Void appears in destruction.” is grammatically wrong. The second half is, like dangling or something. Denny, were you tired when you did this one at all? Normally, your English is better than mine!
@Darth Killer: …
Sorry, the bubble didn’t get the edited text. It was just a slight oversight. I’m sure Den will fix it when we do the biiiiig, end of comic edit. We go through the comic a bubble at a time, do the rewrites in text, then she edits them back into the comic. We did a batch of pages that time, and it must have either been missed or the wrong copy was saved.
Keep in mind that Denny puts this out for free, and I do the editing for free. We do our best, but Denny has a lot of commitments. The comic is a huge project, but it doesn’t pay the rent.
@L: Pretty sure Denny has made that clear time and again herself- She does commissions to pay for things, and she does this story because she genuinely loves the the Fan Fyria she created with her friends. I wouldn’t be commenting if I hadn’t fallen in love with this world as well, and I certainly wouldn’t have phrased it the way I did if I didn’t also value Denny herself highly.
Neo… seriously… you’re about as tactful as a bull at times.
And as to be expected, sudden bumps on the road and unexpected pre-holiday complications left me unable to sit and edit the next page. Apologies once again x_x;
I will try to get something on monday!
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The wind of muse is being purified on the last shot but… it’s probably hard to tell. ^^;
And I just now saw how I missed to clean this page’s borders… x_x
Typo in the last panel, last bubble. “For a long time, we THOUGHT you would meet the same fate…”
Man Chapter 7 is probably my favorite so far – its getting more and more awesome as I click to each new page! Really love Alberius and interesting exposition here! I like the last panel – could tell it was getting purified as the blackness fading away makes it look like the corruption is fading. It’s a pretty neat visual!
I love the High Priest’s serene smile as he says, “They’re dead.”
@Youmitsumi
Whoops! I will correct it when I can!
@Joel
About time we got answers. And to think I was thinking how FF1 will fit in 100 pages… ^^;
@Rogue of Words
Alberius is a practical guy. ^_^;;;
So maybe Grumps is one of the 3 ? Erio maybe ? That would be a twist, would it not ? :D
Bubble 8 needs grammar correction. “Just how Muses appear in your world as inspiring ideas leading to creations, same way the Void appears in destruction.” is grammatically wrong. The second half is, like dangling or something. Denny, were you tired when you did this one at all? Normally, your English is better than mine!
@Darth Killer: …
Sorry, the bubble didn’t get the edited text. It was just a slight oversight. I’m sure Den will fix it when we do the biiiiig, end of comic edit. We go through the comic a bubble at a time, do the rewrites in text, then she edits them back into the comic. We did a batch of pages that time, and it must have either been missed or the wrong copy was saved.
Keep in mind that Denny puts this out for free, and I do the editing for free. We do our best, but Denny has a lot of commitments. The comic is a huge project, but it doesn’t pay the rent.
@L: Pretty sure Denny has made that clear time and again herself- She does commissions to pay for things, and she does this story because she genuinely loves the the Fan Fyria she created with her friends. I wouldn’t be commenting if I hadn’t fallen in love with this world as well, and I certainly wouldn’t have phrased it the way I did if I didn’t also value Denny herself highly.
Neo… seriously… you’re about as tactful as a bull at times.
And as to be expected, sudden bumps on the road and unexpected pre-holiday complications left me unable to sit and edit the next page. Apologies once again x_x;
I will try to get something on monday!