Denny: SO hmmm. The big bubble should be “The wind element, she governs inspiration and memories, some call her Erio.” …but not souding so bad >>; Denny should ask “but it was corrupted?” but now I think “governs memories?” seems like more right thing to ask. And the last panel … I`m not too sure what to have as dialogue here now =_=;
L.: “It’s not the same. She is Erio, the wind element – a muse of inspiration and memory.” Is that better?
Denny: Yep! Hm can we say “muse force”? Since she isn`t a muse like how there are other muses in fanfyria, a different entity
L.: (I also like Grumpy sorta forcing a humanizing element by saying She instead of Denny’s It.) Okay, hang on.
Denny: Yeah ^^
L.: It’s a little weird, cuz she’s more of a muse than they are when you’re talking about mythology, so my phrasing is getting a little jumbled.
Denny: Oh she is. Maybe high muse or something to make her stand out?
L.: “It’s not the same. She is Erio, the wind element – a fount of inspiration and memory.” Or Aspect? Which is kinda like Element.
Denny: I`ve always called them Muse Forces ^^a;; but I was also not so good with the english language back then so not sure how silly that sounded.
[spoilers redacted]
L.: Essence might also work as a title for them.
[spoilers redacted]
L.: “It’s not the same. She is Erio, the wind element – the essence of inspiration and memory.”
Denny: Alrighty that works!
L.: It makes her sound much more important that way, and she is.
Denny: Yup! Thus why corrupting her would corrupt the whole world D8 The void knows where to strike!
L.: “You said back on the roof that it’s corrupted, right?” (Was it the roof?)
Denny: yeah was a roof
L.: And then we have Grumpy quietly say She again for emphasis, and then have Denny catch on. >.>
Denny: hmm maybe have the last panel be something like “Yes, I don`t know why or how.”
“What happens when the wind is corrupted?”
“bad things.”
[spoilers redacted]
L.: “Yes, but I don’t know what happened to her, or why.”
“So what happens when the wind… When she’s corrupted?”
“A darkness I could only guess at.”
[rambling redacted, you’re welcome]
Denny: Hm won`t “Bad things.” for Grumps reply be better considering he is still bit of a jerk and probably wants to finish the convo soon and be off to bed XD;
L.: I dunno, it kinda makes it sound like he doesn’t take it seriously.
Denny: Maybe “Try and guess?”
L.: “Take a wild guess.” Try that. It implies sarcasm.
Denny: perfect! :’D
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L, why would you remove the spoilers? That’s no fun…
Hope you get that computer fixed soon Den!
I don`t even remember the spoilery bits but they were there!
I doubt I`ll get the PC fixed before 9th sadly. x__x;
On the bright side it means more arts from L! He`s been like a drawing machine lately!
*Points fanbase Glare at the repair techs.
*Computer fixed within the hour.
Khend, they were actually kind of boring spoilers, and had to do with far off things. More or less, me asking about world building stuff that you might not see in this comic.