It was a long debate to insert the scene of Xavier going back to his owner or not. I thought it will give a better “Happy End” feel to his story but since I`m so good at taking decisions in the last moment, the next 2 pages might look a little rushed.
And meet Xavier`s owner, your average looking workaholic who doesn`t get when the workday is over. I never mentioned what his profession is like but I always pictured him working in the finances fields. ^^;
@Eugene `s long spoiler-y comment which I had to edit.
I`m making the story on my own as I`m a stubborn goat and only poke Joey and L for editing my engrish though they know where the story is generally going but they don`t know details. So for any absurdity you may come across while reading this, you can blame my head and my thick skull only. ^_^’ I do consult with Joel about one character though (you should know who) as he isn`t mine and one who is yet to show.
Joel is to show in FanFyria2 and Joey is to show in FanFyria3 … some day on the long run when I get to them. FanFyria 1 is all about Denny meeting her muse and finding her role in the world and explaining what the world is like (or parts of it).
… and lastly it`s hard to make a story which you originally created when you were 17, adapt to your current standards of storytelling. *eyes the pile of trashed notes*
AWW This has been such a nice page :’) I love Xavier and the picture of him here has been drawn really well! :D Page 61= <3
He’s going back to his owner, he’s going back to his owner~!! -dances-
Wow, there’s going to be two more series after this? :o I’m excited that Denny gets to meet her muse, can’t wait to see that. Wonder who it could be~
I bet Joel is actually the one who has the whole story in his head, and just psychically passes it on to us in pieces…hence why we both have to keep consulting with him. >>
And ditto on Britt – the panel with Xav is such a good one. I love how magical and wispy it looks. ^_^
Rahna : Maybe grumpy’s flashbacked girl ? Amasing how they share same speech pattern, from what has been revealed so far… :D
But if Xavier goes back to his owner NOW, that means something will happen to the latter to make Xavier come back. That’s no good, for their health i mean…
@Britt~
Now I feel less worried that I inserted the scene. ^^;
@Rahna
Oh, yes plenty more planned. In fact this first one is the hardest to do in the series because it was originally made so long ago and I had to change a lot of it. ^^;
My favourite is 2 of the series but there`ll be a while until we go there. : )
@Joey
There is some truth to this … there has to be! >>
@Darth Killer
Well Xav still needs to come back and return the gold… XD;
Sorry Denny! I can’t even remember what I wrote, but I didn’t mean to spoil nothin’! *feels embarrassed*
On another note, I hope one day we can purchase Xavier plushies! Him smiling and waving just makes me think of what a wonderful plush he’d make.
He’s nt returning it ASAP ? O_o
Lol I’m like wait what why am I mentioned so much in the comments? XD
And this was a pretty beautiful goodbye from Xavier…he really knows how to go out with style! Love how he breaks the fame and everything. Also I like how whenever you show the real world its all… plain and dull in comparison to say..Xavier’s magicalness >>
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It was a long debate to insert the scene of Xavier going back to his owner or not. I thought it will give a better “Happy End” feel to his story but since I`m so good at taking decisions in the last moment, the next 2 pages might look a little rushed.
And meet Xavier`s owner, your average looking workaholic who doesn`t get when the workday is over. I never mentioned what his profession is like but I always pictured him working in the finances fields. ^^;
@Eugene `s long spoiler-y comment which I had to edit.
I`m making the story on my own as I`m a stubborn goat and only poke Joey and L for editing my engrish though they know where the story is generally going but they don`t know details. So for any absurdity you may come across while reading this, you can blame my head and my thick skull only. ^_^’ I do consult with Joel about one character though (you should know who) as he isn`t mine and one who is yet to show.
Joel is to show in FanFyria2 and Joey is to show in FanFyria3 … some day on the long run when I get to them. FanFyria 1 is all about Denny meeting her muse and finding her role in the world and explaining what the world is like (or parts of it).
… and lastly it`s hard to make a story which you originally created when you were 17, adapt to your current standards of storytelling. *eyes the pile of trashed notes*
AWW This has been such a nice page :’) I love Xavier and the picture of him here has been drawn really well! :D Page 61= <3
He’s going back to his owner, he’s going back to his owner~!! -dances-
Wow, there’s going to be two more series after this? :o I’m excited that Denny gets to meet her muse, can’t wait to see that. Wonder who it could be~
I bet Joel is actually the one who has the whole story in his head, and just psychically passes it on to us in pieces…hence why we both have to keep consulting with him. >>
And ditto on Britt – the panel with Xav is such a good one. I love how magical and wispy it looks. ^_^
Rahna : Maybe grumpy’s flashbacked girl ? Amasing how they share same speech pattern, from what has been revealed so far… :D
But if Xavier goes back to his owner NOW, that means something will happen to the latter to make Xavier come back. That’s no good, for their health i mean…
@Britt~
Now I feel less worried that I inserted the scene. ^^;
@Rahna
Oh, yes plenty more planned. In fact this first one is the hardest to do in the series because it was originally made so long ago and I had to change a lot of it. ^^;
My favourite is 2 of the series but there`ll be a while until we go there. : )
@Joey
There is some truth to this … there has to be! >>
@Darth Killer
Well Xav still needs to come back and return the gold… XD;
Sorry Denny! I can’t even remember what I wrote, but I didn’t mean to spoil nothin’! *feels embarrassed*
On another note, I hope one day we can purchase Xavier plushies! Him smiling and waving just makes me think of what a wonderful plush he’d make.
He’s nt returning it ASAP ? O_o
Lol I’m like wait what why am I mentioned so much in the comments? XD
And this was a pretty beautiful goodbye from Xavier…he really knows how to go out with style! Love how he breaks the fame and everything. Also I like how whenever you show the real world its all… plain and dull in comparison to say..Xavier’s magicalness >>
Cant wait to see next!